Feedback

Feedback from the whole class:

Target audience? 
The target audience is for children/babies? It could be for young teenagers. It could be for all types of audience before we know but it does look like it's based on younger kids.

Where it may be screened? 
 The animation maybe screened in a primary school or somewhere like a party maybe? It may be shown in some kind of festival. Some people said it could be shown on YouTube or even TV, the children's channel, cbeebies.

Technical Qualities/Creativity?
There are a few camera angles and that is nice because it's boring to always have the same angles. The animation shows creativity, it looks like you've tried really hard on the beginning, I like how the leaves move around when the bird is flying across the sky. But the main bit where the baby bird is moving around the place, that could have been more interesting because it is a bit boring. But there is some good creativity there. Even though you recorded on IStopMotion, I like that you've editing it on Final Cut Pro. I like the music because it's bubbly and happy. I like the bird sound when the bird is going across the sky and the sound of the egg falling is funny.

Aesthetic Qualities?
I can tell what is happening, it's obvious that the egg is falling and that it cracks and hatches open. I wouldn't say it's to a professional standard but you can see that you've tried. It does look good and any young kids would enjoy it. The 'GoodBye' should have been written in clouds, because it was in the sky.

Storyline?
The storyline is cute but there should have been more things happening because it gets a bit boring in the middle. There should have been more objects moving? And instead of writing goodbye, you should have used that time more creatively

Visual Style?.
The set is nice, I like the big blue background, it's very bright and it attracts people's attention. The tree is very big and the blue background makes the tree stand out more. I think the tree should have more branches on it. The bird and the baby bird is really cute but I think there should have been more birds. When we see the bird come out of the egg, the lighting was too dark. They liked the nest and the egg.

Character movement? 
The baby bird moved smoothly across the page, that was nicely well done. The bird looked like it got stuck a bit at the beginning, you should have done that again. Maybe the bird could have stopped and sat in the tree?

Sound Effects?
The sound effects and music is very cute. It goes well together. Maybe you should have made the sound of the falling egg less loud., so we could hear the bird more. They liked the bird sound.

Strengths/Improvements?
Your strengths are the movement in the objects but you could have made a longer animation? There could have been more animals in there? Or more objects moving around?